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Wednesday

 

A letter to Jodias By Hannah

Spellhill Village
28th November 2006
Dear Jodias,
What a spectaculer letter.
I cant wait to be with all my old friends again we are going to have so much fun.
I will try so hard to make up for everything I missed.
Please spare your magnificant magic for the show.
I shall be so carefull traviling to you because I dont want to be eaten by the monsters.
I am so sorry for tampering with the weather and breaking your wand I shall buy you a new one with my money.
I too am over the moon to be working withyou again.
Your friend,
Balthasar.

Comments:
*STAR* amazing vocab, spectaculer and magnificant
*STAR* goood detail
?WISH? some words went a bit wonky

Emma H
 
*star* - good vocab

*star* - good punctuation

!wish!- check the spelling of travelling
 
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