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Mrs Vaughan By Bili

Mrs Vaughan was a stocky women. She had short,thick,straight and grey hair. She wore her hair up clamped back in a grip. She was careless and didn't care much about the girl. Mrs Vaughan wants Emmeline out of her way. Mrs Vaughan had a cigarette aways dangled from the corner of her mouth.


By Bili

Comments:
star * - good describing words :)

star * - it is good that you have a short paragraph, but it has lot's of information about Mrs Vaughan. :)

wish ¿ - i don't think you have any wishes for this piece of writing.

from ellie :D x
 
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