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The Secret Unicorn by Laura

Book tittle: The Secret Unicorn

Author: Linda Chapan.

Illustractor: Biz Hull

I would recommend this book because there very interesting pictures.

It was cool when Lauren said the words into the unicorns ear.

It was great when Jessica heard that her dad was getting remarried.

The part I like best is: When the unicorn started to fly!

# posted by Woodhill Primary School @ 3:28 AM
Comments:
*STAR*Good spelling
*STAR*Good words used.
?WISH?You could of told us a wee bit more about the unicorn.
# posted by Blogger Killermont Primary School Writing Projects : 5:38 AM
 
*STAR* You have told people about the differnt events in the book and so they would like to find out more.
*STAR* You introduced some charecters.
*WISH* I think that you could use a lot more vocabulary and description and you could also tell us more about the book.
# posted by Blogger Killermont Primary School Writing Projects : 5:43 AM
 
**STAR** I like the way you described some of the events that happened in the story.
**STAR** your review me want to read the book to find out more
?WISH? you could have told me why there was a unicorn in the story and how it appeared.
# posted by Blogger Killermont Primary School Writing Projects : 5:59 AM
 
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