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Sumo Wrestlers by Alexander

SUMO WRESTLERS JUMP OUT AT HALLOWEEN DISCO
At Woodhill Halloween Disco 2 teachers jumped out as sumos.
Miss Mitchell and Mr Lunan jumped out at Woodhill Disco as Sumos
and none of the pupils knew about it. Our reporter asked the winner Mark Christie “where did you get that fabulous costume?” “It was a homemade costume,” Mark cheerfully replied and our other reporter spoke to the other winner Rachel Currie why did you dress half dead “it was the only costume I had” said Rachel. This all took place at Woodhill Primary.

Comments:
*it had good punctuation*


*it was a funny story as well*



wish - it could have been shorter
 
* - It was funny


* - It was good use of punctuation

wish - The first and second line don't make a lot of sence.
 
*STAR* Great puncation
*STAR* Fantastic words
?WISH? The 1st and 2nd lines don't make sence

by Emma 21st May
 
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