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Monday

 

Dandruff Danny

Dandruff Danny was a dirty lad,
In school he was very bad.
He chuckled in maths,
Cause he couldn’t hold his laughs
And a cheeky boy was he!

He shook his head,
It was like bits of bread,
When it fell,
He couldn’t tell.
And a cheeky boy was he!

He rolled in the mud,
And he wasn’t a stud.
The girls wouldn’t play,
So they ran away.

He had so much dandruff
His head exploded,
An alive was he no more!

By Ellie, Rachael and Jennifer.




# posted by Woodhill Primary School @ 3:22 AM
Comments:
* star * There was good rhyming words.
* star * The title was a good example of alliteration.
wish could you put in puncution please By Caitlin and Heather
# posted by Anonymous Anonymous : 3:33 AM
 
* There was a lot of rhyming words.

* We all liked it because it made us laugh.

Wish- it was longer because we enjoyed it so much.
# posted by Anonymous Anonymous : 3:43 AM
 
* Great rhyming words.
* We really like the puncuation.
Wish-We don't think you have any wishes.It was excelent.

By Bili,Emma,Emma.
# posted by Anonymous Anonymous : 3:44 AM
 
that poem was very funny and it had patterns in it , it is very good.


Felix 18/4/07
# posted by Anonymous Anonymous : 3:24 AM
 
* Star * Good ryming words.
* star * good punctuation.
Wish It was longer, i loved it.
By Jennifer and Rachael.
# posted by Anonymous Anonymous : 11:07 AM
 
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