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Cat's, Cat's Everywhere by Bili and Emma

Cats are playful, Cats are slow.
Cats, cats everywhere.
Cats can be fat but, some can be thin.
As long as whiskers.

As fat as a cat.
Cats, cats everywhere
Cats, cats everywhere.
Long tail’s like string, Short tail’s like a bottle.
Some cats bite but, some cats don’t.

# posted by Woodhill Primary School @ 3:23 AM
Comments:
Star - we like the repeat of cats,cats, everywhere.

Star - good use of full stops and commas

Wish - can you take out apostrophes for tails because it is a plural

Room10
# posted by Anonymous Anonymous : 2:23 AM
 
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