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Monday

 

My Sympathetic Character by Sarah


He was a plump silly old circus man who was thoughtful, caring and happy with a beard down to his knees. He wore a baggy old t-shirt and some torn up jeans. He loved children so much but had none of his own and gave a lolly to them whenever they came.

# posted by Woodhill Primary School @ 3:34 AM
Comments:
I think your opening line is excellent.
I like your description of his clothes.
Could you say something about him being a clown and how he liked to make people laugh?
Mrs Buchanan
# posted by Blogger Woodhill Primary School : 4:05 AM
 
I think your clown was very good.
I liked the way you said he was plump.
No wishes

Thank you for the comment.

Chloe
# posted by Blogger Woodhill Primary School : 4:16 AM
 
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