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Monday

 

Horrible by Logan


On Monday
I missed break,
I messed up my test and
I made the teacher angry.

On Tuesday
I teased the teacher,
I tripped in class and
Trashed the toilet.

On Wednesday
I wet the bed,
I wrestled the janitor and
I went to the Wild West.

On Thursday
I trashed the TV,
I touched a tarantula and
then I tortured the tarantula.

On Friday
I fell out of bed,
I made my hair frizzy and
I fried a frog.

On Saturday
I sucked on a soap sweet,
I fell out of a tree and
I fell of my bike.

On Sunday
I woke up in hospital,
I had to eat broccolli and
I woke up with chickenpox.

Comments:
You used a lot of good words.
You have not made any mistakes.
Could you make your sentences a wee bit longer.
 
I think your poem was really funny,
It was also very creative.

No wishes

Mate Chloe!
 
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