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Monday

 

Horrible by Andrew


On Monday ........
I made a fool of my self on stage.
I misssed break time.
I got lost in a maze.

On Tuesday ........
A turcky tackled me
A Army troop trapped me in a cave
A teature gave me in to trouble.

On Wednesday........
I went fishing and a huge big fish pulled me into the water.
I went to see king kong and I payed my money and missed the show.
I went rock climbing and I got to the top and wet my pants from looking down.

On Thursday .........
I Took my tooth paste put it on my electric tooth brush and it spun round and the tooth paste went in my eye.
I was driving a car and my tyres fell off
I took a boat ride and was sick all over the boat.

On Friday......
I faced a bully and was pushed on to the ground.
I got very fat and people made fun of me.
I went to fast on a car and was fined.

On Saturday........

I sat on a bench and there was bird poo on it.
I was on the beach and a little boy thew sand in my eye.
I got a good job the 5 hours latter i got the sack.

On Sunday.........
A spider trapped me in its web and i was stuck for hours.
My mum forced me to eat asparagus and i was sick
The sun got to hot and i got burnt and it all happend again next week.

Comments:
*star*I liked the bit when the troop trapped you in the cave

*star* The punctuation was good

?wish? how many spelling mistakes can you spot.
 
* Star* we like your poem

*Star* Your poem is very funny

?Wish? Check the spelling of TURKEY!!

CHLOE, EMMA MC AND BILI
 
*STAR* I think each of the verses are very funny.

*STAR* I like it how in some of the verses you have managed to use the same word in all the lines.

?WISH? Watch your spelling the next time!
 
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